Top 10 Common Mistakes

  • Boring Opening Paragraph
  • Overly Brief Statement
  • Unnatural, Verbose Language
  • Poor Spelling and Grammar
  • Lack of Structure
  • Re-Listing Information Already Provided
  • Lack of Academic Focus
  • Too Career Focused
  • Lack of Passion for the Subject
  • Too Generic

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personal statement revisionPersonal Statement Revision for the Right Finishing Touch

To give yourself the best chance of getting accepted into the college or university program you want every part of your application package to be just right. Unfortunately, there is little you can do to change transcripts and test scores. To give your application chances a boost, your best bet is the personal statement essay. To be effective your personal statement must address the following questions that admissions would like to have answered:

  • What motivated you to pursue this particular field of study?
  • What is your level of commitment to completing the course?
  • Are you a good fit for the program and are you well suited to the field?

Just stating that “I’m really motivated and really committed” isn’t going to have any impact, at least not in a positive way. What may give your personal statement an extra punch is using a good personal statement revision service like the one our company provides to give something extra to your statement of purpose. Our editorial services include personal statement revision by some of the best professional editors in the industry.

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Revision of a personal statement might involve anything from small changes up to a complete rewrite. One of our editors will analyze every part of the personal statement. Every editor we use has earned a PhD and in addition, has extensive experience with personal statements and the application process in their field. As editors are only assigned to work on personal statements in their field, you are assured that the editor working on your personal statement knows exactly the type of information to include and the best way to present it as well as what should be avoided. The editor will mark a draft of your personal statement with any suggested revisions for your personal statement review. The final decision regarding revisions is yours. Your editor will explain why they think something should be revised but it is your statement and will be written how you want. After all, revisions are made the personal statement is proofread a final time and checked for plagiarism before we send it to you. The following are an example of an original personal statement paragraph followed by the same paragraph after being revised:

Original paragraph from a computer programming personal statement

“I would like to attend college in order to study computer programming. I have been familiar with computers from the age of six. I mostly played games and used the computer for my studies in the beginning. In time I become interested in software and programming and designed a game when I was nine but it wasn’t very complicated. Computer programming is a field that I find interesting and that offers many opportunities if you have the right training and education. I am familiar with several programming languages already. There are many courses available for free online and I have learned C, C+ and Python through my online studies. I still like to design games and have made several that are much better than my first one.”

Computer programming personal statement paragraph after revision

“I was only nine years old when I designed my first computer game using software and programming skills I taught myself. My skills have improved since then and I have learned C, C+ and Python through free online courses. The games I design now are better than my first attempt but it was through designing that first game that I started to develop a growing interest in computer programming. That interest continues to grow and I am applying to your computer programming program to pursue computer programming as a career. Having the right training and education in computer programming provides many opportunities while allowing me to feed my interest.”

The writer has some good content to work within the original version but the way it is presented doesn’t do it justice. The revised version contains essentially the same information presented in a slightly different way. The opening sentence is far more likely to catch the reader’s attention in the second version. Both versions show the writer has had an interest in the field for some time but the second shows more clearly how it has progressed. It also shows the writer has initiative and a real desire to learn programming which the reader will understand, without it having to be stated outright.

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