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  • Overly Brief Statement
  • Unnatural, Verbose Language
  • Poor Spelling and Grammar
  • Lack of Structure
  • Re-Listing Information Already Provided
  • Lack of Academic Focus
  • Too Career Focused
  • Lack of Passion for the Subject
  • Too Generic

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personal statement review serviceA Personal Statement Review Service Can Suggest Positive Changes to Your Personal Statement

One way for applicants to college and university programs to stand out from the crowd of other applicants is the personal statement. College application usually doesn’t provide many opportunities to directly communicate with admissions and make a case for why you should be accepted into their program. The personal statement essay you submit may be the only chance you get.

To be effective your personal statement must:

  • Show that you are a good fit for the program and well suited for the field
  • Indicate that you have a high level of commitment to completing the program
  • Provide admissions with an idea of your motivation for choosing the field and program you did

That’s quite a bit to expect from a one-page document but far from impossible. A good personal statement review service like the one our company provides can make significant improvements to your personal statement essay. Just ask us to “review my personal statement” and our editorial services will have somebody assigned to your statement.

How Our Personal Statement Review Service Can Help

When you request a personal statement review from our personal statement revision service, one of our professional editors will be assigned to you. Every editor we use has a PhD and is only assigned to personal statements in their field. With the extensive personal statement experience they possess in the field and their familiarity with the application process, they know exactly what admissions like to see in the personal statement. When our editor reviews your statement he will be looking for changes that can be made that will make your statement of purpose more appealing to admissions, as well as for things that could detract from the impression you want to make. With your approval, the suggested changes can be made and then a last proofreading and plagiarism check will be done. The following is an example of personal statement section in its original form, and an example of the same section after changes suggested in the review were made:

Section from the Original Engineering Personal Statement

“While in high school I always did well in any of the classes that would help me in engineering. In the sciences I averaged over 95 percent and the same in mathematics. My computing scores were over 93 percent and I averaged 98 percent in physics. These classes will help me understand some of the scientific principles behind engineering techniques. What I learned in my physics classes has taught me a great deal about how things work also. I didn’t do as well in history and English which helped push me towards engineering. As a hobby I design and build different styles of bicycles. For the last three years I have worked part-time as a mechanic on weekends. I feel all of this will help me in an engineering course and in the engineering field.”

Section after Review Suggestions Were Followed

“As a hobby I design and build different styles of bicycles. Every bicycle was designed for a different purpose using engineering principals involving gearing, leverage and others which allowed me to see first-hand, different concepts in action. In addition for the last three years I have worked part-time as a mechanic on weekends. This has given me over 1000 hours of hands on experience working on machinery and becoming familiar with different tools as well as learning from experience about some of the mechanical principles and concepts that it takes to keep an automobile running.”

Although the writer has good grades in classes that will benefit him in engineering, none of the information concerning the grades or classes should be included in the personal statement. It just duplicates information provided in transcripts. That eliminates 75 percent of the material contained in the paragraph, leaving one sentence about their hobby and one about their job. One suggestion was for the writer to elaborate on their hobby, their job or both as they can both be considered relevant to the course. Whereas the first version contributes nothing of real significance to make your case, the second version shows how the writer gained over a thousand hours of relevant experience that will potentially benefit them as an engineer. It is also information not included elsewhere and shows an interest that goes back several years.

personal statement reviewUse Our Personal Statement Review Service to Improve Your Personal Statement

Having an expert who knows what admissions are looking for is best when reviewing the statement of purpose and proofreading personal statement. Editing will make the changes suggested and before you know it you have a personal statement that highlights the elements of your statement that will create the most favorable impression. Using any of our editorial services is easy with the advantages we provide such as:

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Contact us for personal statement review service that increases your chances of getting into your program of choice!

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