Top 10 Common Mistakes

  • Boring Opening Paragraph
  • Overly Brief Statement
  • Unnatural, Verbose Language
  • Poor Spelling and Grammar
  • Lack of Structure
  • Re-Listing Information Already Provided
  • Lack of Academic Focus
  • Too Career Focused
  • Lack of Passion for the Subject
  • Too Generic

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Personal statement editing can be the difference between mediocre and great

Submitting a personal statement for university application is pretty much a given whether you are applying for an undergraduate program of going for a masters or PhD. Admissions isn’t just concerned that applicants have good grade point averages and test scores.

They also would like to know:

  • How well suited you are for the field and what kind of fit you will be in the program
  • How committed you are to completing the course of study
  • What your motivation is for choosing the particular field and program.

These are the things that the personal statement is meant to reveal about applicants. When selecting between two equally well qualified applicants, the one with the better personal statement will usually be the one selected. In some cases a good personal statement can even get you the nod over an applicant slightly better qualified, but who appears to lack commitment and motivation. You can’t predict when the personal statement will become the deciding factor, so the best approach is to act as if it is always going to be. So you have done the best you can on your personal statement and it is as good as you can make it but not great. You should consider using a personal statement editing service and personal statement checking service like the one our company provides.

personal statement editingPersonal statement editing can help you stand out and attract the right kind of attention

When you use our service you are in good hands. Our professional editors all have PhD degrees and are assigned only to work on statements in the same field as their degree. They have extensive experience editing personal statement essays and know what programs in the field are looking for. The will look at things like word choice, flow and structure and determine if changes are needed. Before altering any part of the statement you must first give your approval as ultimately it is your personal statement. Don’t hesitate to ask why something should be changed. Here is a sample from a personal statement as it was originally and then the edited version:

Original portion of the personal statement

“I have thought long and hard about the path my career would take and like the Beatles I know I have a long and windy road in front of me. After much research and deeply examining and investigating to the fullest depths the different and various opportunities presented, I have concluded the Business Management is the best suitable alternative available to me. Business and the way companies are managed is changing rapidly and faster with new technologies that are emerging at a rapid and faster pace. The companies that will be the most successful in the future will be those that adapt to the new technologies faster rather than resisting change which hinders their advancement. I believe a new generation of business managers that will have the advantage of growing up with the technologies being employed is coming up. The companies that are growing the fastest and establishing themselves are those taking advantage of and employing and using new technologies and methods. It is an exciting time to become involved in business with many opportunities where I can help my fellow mankind.”

Edited version of the personal statement

“After much thought I have decided that Business Management is the best course for me. Business and how companies are managed is changing with new technologies emerging at a rapid pace. The most successful companies in the future will be those that adapt to new technologies quickly instead of resisting change. Already the fastest growing companies are those using new technologies and methods to their advantage. A new generation of business managers that has grown up with many of these technologies is starting to appear and I would like to be one of them.”

In the original personal statement two things seem apparent. One is that the writer appears to not have anything to say and is attempting to fill space. The second is that they recently discovered what a thesaurus is. They used 62 words to say what the revised version does in 15 words. The reference to the Beatles has no relevance whether the road is winding or windy. Concise writing is best in personal statements and helping your fellow man (mankind is used incorrectly) isn’t relevant to the purpose of the statement. The writer does indicate why they chose business management in a generic way which is better than nothing. It would help if they had included something specific they found that drew their interest to business management.

Our personal statement proofreading and personal statement editing service excels at improving personal statements and ensuring you attract the right type of attention from admissions.

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